Mysterious Forest
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Mysterious Forest
by tayaironside Tue Oct 08, 2013 2:39 pm
As the lightning speaks
while the shadows reach into the wind
the night roars as the thunder strikes
branches creak, trees tremble
the moon sparkles across the sky
rain then creeps from the dark clouds
the sky breathes thunder
I hope they do not go in the "Mysterious Forest"
while the shadows reach into the wind
the night roars as the thunder strikes
branches creak, trees tremble
the moon sparkles across the sky
rain then creeps from the dark clouds
the sky breathes thunder
I hope they do not go in the "Mysterious Forest"
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Re: Mysterious Forest
by Admin Wed Oct 09, 2013 12:17 am
Powerful imagery Taya! Your personification really brings the poem to life.
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