Mysterious Forest
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Mysterious Forest
by cullan13 Tue Oct 08, 2013 2:40 pm
The moon glistens through the night,
rain trembles through the air,
roots quake late at night,
it’s gonna give you a huge fright!
Creeping through the tall trees bend,
Taunting through the forest descends,
Shadows creep on the ground,
You are next so don’t be found!
rain trembles through the air,
roots quake late at night,
it’s gonna give you a huge fright!
Creeping through the tall trees bend,
Taunting through the forest descends,
Shadows creep on the ground,
You are next so don’t be found!
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Re: Mysterious Forest
by epic maxkolopenuk Tue Oct 08, 2013 2:45 pm
hi cullan I think ur thing is cool how do u upload
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Re: Mysterious Forest
by Admin Wed Oct 09, 2013 12:20 am
You did a great job of creating an eerie tone Cullan. They rhyming couplets are a nice touch!
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Re: Mysterious Forest
by Nate 87 Tue Oct 29, 2013 9:33 pm
I like how it rymes in it a bit and dosen't in the rest.
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