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Post by Nickie Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:45 pm

A dark forest on hollows eve.
Wolves howl lightning flashes.
Vampires taunt ghost roam.
People fear the monsters of the dark.
The moon shines bright for the return of SLENDERMAN.
He decends from the underworld..
To tickle you.
Yet he smiles and has no face.

BWAHAHAHAHAH:affraid: affraid affraid affraid

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Post by Admin Sat Nov 09, 2013 1:16 am

A Nickie in the dark wrote:
he smiles and has no face.
I'm not sure if you realize it, but you have used a sophisticated literary technique called paradox. It is when you state something that seems contradictory, or impossible, but if you really think about it, it reveals some kind of message. I interpret what you said to mean the joy he feels when he reaches out and tickles cannot be seen, but you can sense it in other, mysterious, ways.
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Post by Nate 87 Tue Apr 29, 2014 12:57 pm

Great!!! And: affraid affraid affraid 
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Post by Joelmacdermott Tue Apr 29, 2014 12:59 pm

awesome poem lol! 
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