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Post by Zhaleh23 Tue Oct 22, 2013 2:35 pm

I Saw a forest filled with shadow's
I tried to run but there was Thunder affraid
It was so dark I couldn't see  
I was circled around the shadow's
I tried to run but I couldn't move
As I stood the wind was whistling
Ran began to fall
Then there I was alone...

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Post by tayaironside Tue Oct 22, 2013 2:39 pm

I really like how you used descriptive words
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Post by Zhaleh23 Tue Oct 22, 2013 2:40 pm

thanks

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Post by Admin Fri Oct 25, 2013 10:31 am

Taya is right, your descriptive words make it easy for the reader to create an image in his or her head.
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Post by Nate 87 Tue Oct 29, 2013 9:58 pm

What happens next?
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