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Post by cassidy7 Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:46 pm

Through the night the shadows weep
with creeping sounds of stomping feet
Through the trees the wind blows
From up in the sky the moon shines
The look of lightning lighting up the sky
sound of thunder making echo’s cry
Trees swaying lonely through the wind
Rain pounding on the roots within.
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Post by Admin Sat Nov 09, 2013 1:11 am

Beautiful imagery Cassidy, it creates a haunting mood.
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Post by tayaironside Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:28 pm

that actually made me see the image in my head! that's a really great poem
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Post by Olivia11 Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:45 pm

nice poem cass cass its great! Laughing 
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