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the forest of shadows

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Post by sogolsafahani22 Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:36 pm

the shadows creep out below the moon
they tried to run through the forest
whispering to each other
as the earth shook
the shadows gathered
beginning to speak
rain started to fall
that was the end of the forest of shadows
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Post by Admin Sat Nov 09, 2013 1:24 am

Interesting personification Sogol, that combined with your imagery create an eerie mood.
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