awakening souls
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awakening souls
Awakening souls
Shadows creep as branches bend
In the dark night forest
Through the green trees the wind whispers
The souls tremble through the night
Oh how they wish the the scary night
Would keep away and forever be long
Gone.
Shadows creep as branches bend
In the dark night forest
Through the green trees the wind whispers
The souls tremble through the night
Oh how they wish the the scary night
Would keep away and forever be long
Gone.
sanam- Scribe
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Join date : 2013-10-22
Re: awakening souls
The single word at the end of your poem creates emphasis, and the word itself is quite strong. This creates a definite sense of finality, you've used quite a sophisticated technique!
Re: awakening souls
Great job!
Nate 87- Wordsmith
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Age : 21
Location : Nanaimo
Re: awakening souls
i love how the last line is just a word! POWERFUL!
SaraT18- Scribe
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Age : 23
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