The Log Cabin
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The Log Cabin
by Keifer Wed Oct 23, 2013 9:24 pm
The Log Cabin
in the log cabin where the wispy woods willow
where the dead bodies hang from the lurking shadows
sits a helpless cabin creaking and shrieking
and if you see somebody going towards it you may not want to follow
cause if you try and sneak a peek you may not see tomorrow
in the log cabin where the wispy woods willow
where the dead bodies hang from the lurking shadows
sits a helpless cabin creaking and shrieking
and if you see somebody going towards it you may not want to follow
cause if you try and sneak a peek you may not see tomorrow
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Re: The Log Cabin
by Admin Fri Oct 25, 2013 10:25 am
I like how you incorporated rhyme into your poem! I also see you using poetic devices we haven't even learned yet! Look-up the poetic device alliteration and see if you can find where you've used it. You're a poet and you didn't even know it!
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