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Post by sanam Tue Oct 22, 2013 2:45 pm

Awakening souls
Shadows creep as branches bend
In the dark night forest
Through the green trees the wind whispers
The souls tremble through the night
Oh how they wish the the scary night
Would keep away and forever be long
Gone.
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Post by Admin Fri Oct 25, 2013 10:28 am

The single word at the end of your poem creates emphasis, and the word itself is quite strong. This creates a definite sense of finality, you've used quite a sophisticated technique!
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Post by Nate 87 Tue Oct 29, 2013 10:00 pm

Great job!Cool
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Post by SaraT18 Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:26 pm

i love how the last line is just a word! POWERFUL!Very Happy Very Happy
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Post by sanam Mon Dec 09, 2013 2:05 pm

thx bounce rabbit rendeer rendeer rendeer rendeer rendeer rendeer rendeer rendeer rendeer 
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