Why I have Decideed to Loan to the Philippines

Could you imagine looking forward in your life, and knowing that you will only live to the age 69? This is what everyone in the Philippines look forward too. Which means your children and parents will be unlikely living past the age of 69 years of age. With this life expectancy rate I think the Philippines is a responsible country to loan too.
Transportation is very different there, only 30 motor vehicles per capita! That means almost every single citizen is forced to walk to important destinations. These outstanding citizens walk to their jobs, appointments, and gatherings. Do you think these citizens wake up excited to walk miles to get to their jobs? Also think about this, in a major medical crisis where could you go to get the help you need, when you needed it? You couldn’t.
If you think in the Philippines it’s hard for the adults? Well think about how hard life is for the children. With an infant mortality rate of 18.19% close to 18% of children wouldn’t live. Which means there isn’t very good healthcare in that country.
The Philippines is not a wealthy country and had a gdp per capita of 2,587. This means they don’t have enough money for decent healthcare. If a country has a low gdp rate it just goes down from there. They don’t have anything like Canada has.
With their motor vehicle rate, infant mortality rate, average life expectancy rate, and gdp, we could really make a difference. I know that lending through kiva to the Philippines would be a responsible , and life changing thing to do for them.

nice job maybe our group should have voted for Philippines then           

Erindarby14 wrote:
The Philippines is not a wealthy country and had a gdp per capita of 2,587. This means they don’t have enough money for decent healthcare. If a country has a low gdp rate it just goes down from there. They don’t have anything like Canada has.
With their motor vehicle rate, infant mortality rate, average life expectancy rate, and gdp, we could really make a difference. I know that lending through kiva to the Philippines would be a responsible , and life changing thing to do for them.  

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