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Heart of The Woods

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Post by shannonkearey Tue Oct 15, 2013 2:46 pm

As the sun shrinks down

It awakens the dark, cold ghost town

But past boarders lay the wood

With looming whom are misunderstood

As the wind creaks through braches below

Warning lost travelers not to go

For those unfortunate enough not to hear

I hope they go not near

The part of the woods where the ghosts are strong

And sing of a world long gone
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Post by Admin Fri Oct 25, 2013 10:39 am

Your poem seems to tell a story, it's mysterious and a little bit frightening. The ending leaves the reader hungry for more, a skill usually seen in the writing of accomplished writers.
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Post by sanam Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:20 pm

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Post by Nate 87 Tue Oct 29, 2013 9:49 pm

Wouldn't want to go there.affraid
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