one(s) who fly.(or at least try)
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one(s) who fly.(or at least try)
there once was a young man from Peru,
who claimed that he had only one shoe.
he wanted to fly, so he gave it a try,
now he's a splat in Nauru.
his son was as bad,
his first name was Chad,
and now he's a cow in waterloo.
Now, his son was worse,
he sold milk from a hearse,
and he wanted to fly like the first.
then there was a fourth,
who didn't know his worth
and wanted to fly
quite like the third, second and first.
who claimed that he had only one shoe.
he wanted to fly, so he gave it a try,
now he's a splat in Nauru.
his son was as bad,
his first name was Chad,
and now he's a cow in waterloo.
Now, his son was worse,
he sold milk from a hearse,
and he wanted to fly like the first.
then there was a fourth,
who didn't know his worth
and wanted to fly
quite like the third, second and first.
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epic maxkolopenuk- Wordsmith
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Re: one(s) who fly.(or at least try)
You have put your own twist on the limerick, did you know that? Nice work!
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that poem was awesome:
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lol funny poem max!!
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Funny Maximus!!!
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thanks for the positive comments everybody
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haha nice
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pretty good
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Love that poem!
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Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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