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Post by epic maxkolopenuk Tue Oct 22, 2013 2:31 pm

there once was a young man from Peru,
who claimed that he had only one shoe.
he wanted to fly, so he gave it a try,
now he's a splat in Nauru.
his son was as bad,
his first name was Chad,
and now he's a cow in waterloo.
Now, his son was worse,
he sold milk from a hearse,
and he wanted to fly like the first.
then there was a fourth,
who didn't know his worth
and wanted to fly
quite like the third, second and first.


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Post by epic maxkolopenuk Tue Oct 22, 2013 2:47 pm

hi
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Post by Admin Fri Oct 25, 2013 10:26 am

You have put your own twist on the limerick, did you know that? Nice work!
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Post by MarcusCraig Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:09 pm

that funny max
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Post by conraddawes Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:12 pm

HI
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Post by Joelmacdermott Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:47 pm

that poem was awesome:
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Post by Keifer Tue Oct 29, 2013 8:06 pm

lol funny poem max!!
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Post by Nate 87 Tue Oct 29, 2013 9:30 pm

Funny Maximus!!!lol!
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Post by epic maxkolopenuk Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:20 pm

thanks for the positive comments everybody sunny 
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Post by cullan13 Mon Dec 09, 2013 1:56 pm

haha nice  tongue 
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Post by cullan13 Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:25 pm

pretty good  What a Face   afro   bom 
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Post by Nate 87 Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:24 am

Love that poem! Razz 
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Post by Nate 87 Mon Jun 02, 2014 1:28 pm

Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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